Improve your Writing: Show, Not Tell

Become a better writer, no matter what you’re writing! I’ll show you how to take simple, boring sentences and turn them to vibrant, expressive writing. As you practice this technique in your writing, you will find it carries over to your everyday spoken English as well. Before you know it, you’ll be a more dynamic, compelling speaker and writer.

Got 09/10 ☺😊. Amazing lesson. Thanks Benjamin.

Annie

Not very easy for my first lesson, but very interesting.
Tha,ks Benjamin

GAUDAINE

Thanks .

Ola khater

Thanks Benjamin. Amazing lesson. And poor me, never noticed how simple my statements were.

Turk182

I got only 9 out of 10 , thanks Benjamin

yasser Daoud

Perfect thanks 👏👏👏👏👍👍👍✌️💕

mguerrin@ymail.com

An exciting, curious lesson. Thanks Benjamin. Now I will be a writer ;)

Adamos32

Excellent!

Zahra

Interesting lesson, thanks a lot Benjamin!!

knopfler86

cheers mate

Bab Edjdid

Hey
I’m new here
How can I ask my questions??

Mehri Ghaderi

Welcome, Mehri! Just put your question in a comment! :)

engVid Moderator

amazing, i got 8 out of 10. It is a good realization and wake up call for me to be more serious and not assume that i have great command over this language

ayyappabv

OMG 10/10!
Every sentences are quite similar to each other to picked up which answer suit the best to the questions. Particularly Quiz No 2 and 4 are indeed hard to find the correct one.
i never expected to achieve the score at the time i started taking the quiz.
Thanks Teacher Benjamin for your simple and clear explanation.

Ye Yint Aung

this has been one of my favorite lessons ever. :)

jorgeist19

Thank you Benjamin

Tyrion

thanks a lat Benjamin. This lesson mad me strode how to learn English faster

Rajab1234

one correct out of ten.bad day for me…

Rico26

sentences looked similar

valessa1993

Very, very, very good lesson.Thanks!

zigmund

very interesting and also useful

waheedii

Ben! this test was difficult!I flunked it twice.

Mikesyndrom

When it comes to excitement , it makes me dancing in my mind.10 on 10

Ahsan Habib Patwary

9/10, thank you

Faridka

9/10 not bad thank u Benjamin :-)

ahmed69

6/10 without watching the video video

Amine Pipo

Thank you Sir.

pabloperez1010

how do i watch the video? i am chinese in china.

Phoebe321

great

Islombek Aliyev

Thank you for this great lesson! I think I’m going to become an exctited writer!!
Bye.

Tizianacakes

Nice lesson. Thank you sir.

sydneyoz

9/10, thank you

hieuls63

ok,nice

Fmodica

It was nice lessson! What a such boring statement :D

Thank you your advices to improving writing skills. I had written so boring sentences before. From now, I already got some experiments to become a better writer!

linh linh

The answer is not exact.

liding

Got 10/10 very usefull lesson, thanks Benjamin!!

emma-3.1416

I got 9/10..It’s a fun quiz..Thanks Benj

Lottie1974

wow got 10/10. A plus to my writing skill. Hurray.

krix24

thanks Benjamin,

suratman

it was great lesson to improve writting .. thanks sir

iram hanif

i got 10 out of 10..in quez

iram hanif

I felt like I’m Shakespeare or another great linguist when I saw that yellow box and a brown one hundred inside it at the end of the quiz. ;)
Thank you teacher.

momen.dahab@yahoo.com

i used to read a novel, and this is what they do to make reader kept read until the end of the story because the way authors write it’s not something simple.

arinten

Very useful advices. Thank you so much, Benjamin.

OscarDan

Nice lesson

arahim.kath

10/10!!! Thanks Benjamin!

Gabriel

hi
dear Benjamin
the methods your teaching it is amazing
thank you very …..so much
best regards

hadi1973

8/10 Nice lesson..!!

Sanju

I also got 9/10, amazing

hosnaara

Thank you very much for the video, Benjamin. It made me realise I have a limited vocabulary that I need to expand.

Haikal Faza

thnx

zorro007

Great lesson! I have a better grasp on providing the details when describing specific scenarios.

kmsp

Very difficult for me(((

HalynaDalto

Really thanks~

phoorumi

What an instructive class.
I liked #9 best! Excellent vocabulary. Thank you
very much.

zigmund

The questions is so very hard for me 😔 but it is very helpful i have learned ..

Feb Lim manogura

Thanks.

shaminur

i got 10 out of 10…. full marks

HAK 7

very helpful

HAK 7

Thanks so much Ben.. With you, it’s so easy to learn.

Sharon18

7/10 I have to try hard :D
this is very cool way ~ THanks Benjamin

Indah Fitriyany

10\10
i couldn’t enjoined more :)

thank you

Amani Eldaw

i couldn’t enjoy more, it is so interesting video

Amani Eldaw

Thank you!

Alvarez66

Very helpful and I will remember to PICTURE it and add drama.

Thanks

aneckg

10/10 yeah~ Just pick the longest sentence and that’s a secret. ;)

Julia Fu

I got 10/10!

Zumrad

Thank you !Hard lesson , but I learned something thank you so much😉

Reynalda

I got 10/10. :D

dennisamoah705

it hard lesson

alrub

I scored 10 on 10. I appreciate your help.

Best,
Gokul Gomez

Gokul Gomez

Thank you so much. I think you are best teacher in this program. You are so helpful for me.

BabekHuseynov

This video made life live. Thank you for sharing.

RasouliBiotech

And she got 100, how excited could she get.
Thank you Benjamin..

Sumaya2019

The highest score is always stirring one’s ambition.
Thank you Mr. Benjamin.

Alex-1956

I have just learned that a good writer is one who draws a picture using words than telling a boring history. Thank you

Saint

You got 10 correct out of 10.

RavenTBNR

I liked this quiz, it helped me a lot with showing than just telling.

14433sha

I got 10/10 😊

14433sha

never thought am sUch a bullseye hitter XD

THANKS A LOT.

motasem.usus

Very nice and usefu. Thanks Benjamin and EngVid.

AKM Mostafa

I got 10/10

MEH

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