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In a paragraph about the benefits of caffeine, which of the following should NOT be included?

Examples should be very general and applicable to many topics.

Each paragraph should be clearly marked by either a tab/indent or a skipped line, but not both.

It is fine to discuss two or three topics if the paragraph is very long, but only one topic is recommended in a short paragraph.

However, an increase in physical energy isn't the only benefit of regular exercise.

Which of the following sentences would best follow the sentence above?

Transition words such as moreover, in addition to, however, and others should only be used in special cases and not often.

Paragraphs are stand-alone units of ideas. It is not necessary to connect one paragraph to another as long as the ideas in each paragraph are complete.

That being said, corporations can't always be held responsible for their employees' behavior outside the office. They can, however, offer incentives and punishments to help employees be conscientious ambassadors of the company's brand image.

Which of the following sentences would best start the next paragraph?

It is only appropriate to repeat words in a paragraph when they are technical terms, or when no/few synonyms exist.

A paragraph can consist of only one sentence.

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290 Comments on “Writing Skills: The Paragraph”

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hi i am Anthony from hungry and i am living in bournemouth , if somebody want practise english in verbal method you can find me on the skype my skype name is dravant thanks ..

Monday, July 22nd 2013

    hi anthony i’d like to practise english verbally. i’ve sent u request on ur skype. this is my skype id: chohan_yemeen.

    Sunday, July 28th 2013

    ok skype me on balonga22

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

it is a little bit to understand your lesson.

Monday, July 22nd 2013

    a little bit easy or hard? ;)

    it’s all a matter of practice.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

      try to conclude this lesson below:


      1, thesis statement(general) + supporting details (why important, reasons, examples)

      2, flow bridges (sentence to sentence), end with bridge (paragraph to paragraph)

      3, indent or skip a line, any length but 4-6 sentences in TOEFL

      “it is all a matter of practice”.

      many thanks.

      Thursday, November 14th 2013

      hi Adam it’s hard for me ı can understant your pıon whıle you’r speakıng ın that video but your grammar was too compilicated for me can u gıve me some suggestıons about that ?=

      Saturday, January 4th 2014

      hello sir, is there any you can check my work ?

      Monday, January 20th 2014

      It was ok. It’s not a difficult topic, but, like you said, it’s a matter of practice.

      Friday, March 14th 2014

      It’s a matter of practice

      Monday, August 10th 2015

      Hey Adam,
      How much practice one requires in tackling all grammar and writing issues? unfortunately, found your channel when exams are near. . Rep Asap :)

      Friday, October 28th 2016


    Tuesday, June 12th 2018

thanks a lot that what we needed for IELTS
pleas if you have more present to us about Writing essay for IELTS

Monday, July 22nd 2013

Nice topic, it helps to understand reader & make it interesting too.
Nice lesson.

Monday, July 22nd 2013

please do more lessons for writing thank you

Monday, July 22nd 2013

Very, very interest topic. After this lesson I’m sure that next articles or reports writes by me will be short and full understandable. Thanks.

Monday, July 22nd 2013

Fantastic lesson Adam!!!!. It’s crystal clear but I know I’ll watch this video a few more times. This topic is probably my weakest point and your explanations are a big help for me. I think it would be very good for those of us with a certain level to go deeper in writing skills. Although it is not nice to repeat words in the same paragraph, FANTASTIC LESSON all the way.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really like the way you teach, also
the subject of the paragraph and the vocabulary you used.

P.D. I’m looking forward to be enlightened by all of you with many more masterpieces like this one.

Monday, July 22nd 2013

    Thank you Carlos :)

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Hi Teacher. I am very happy to see your vedio. You have explained each sentence very well, i love it. After today, I’m sure that i will follow your suggestions when i will start to write my thesis. Thanks.
My question is that May I join your course online to improve my speaking and writing english? I need your kind help. Please suggest me

Monday, July 22nd 2013

    Hi Mohi,

    I’m working on that. I’ll let you know.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

It is also amazing lecture. It is exclusive. It occured to me that I am so lucky and happy to be able to see this high quality lesson for free. Thanks for well-organized lesson. b^^

Monday, July 22nd 2013

please do more lessons for writing . thank you

Monday, July 22nd 2013

    ok, but if i want to write a paragraph or essays .. i can not write in the right way and found the Specific sentence four each other ..

    Monday, November 14th 2016

Im gonna have Ielts this week, so this lesson was really useful and helpful for me to understand all tricks of writing paragraphs. I have some problems with writing as sometimes i don’t know what to write about. If it’s not difficult for u, could u please give me some essential tips for writing tasks (1 and 2). Thanks in advance.
P.S. Once again – lesson was brilliant!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Hi Kate,

    I’m afraid there is too much to tell you about that here. I will make some lessons on that but it might take some time.

    For now though:
    task 1- do not give an opinion.
    – first paragraph summarize the task given ( i.e., what are you looking at?)
    – next two paragraphs, mention highlights, that is highs and lows, major trends, drastic changes, etc. don’t try to include everything.
    – there is no need for a conclusion.

    task 2:- have an introduction that presents the topic, the question, your stand on the question, and how you will argue for it.
    – at least two body paragraphs, one for each line of reasoning you will take (as presented in intro)
    – conclusion should be a short summary of the essay. Do not introduce new ideas.
    – make sure you give good and realistic examples.

    Hopefully you have already passed your test so this is needless, but just in case. :)

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

      Thank u so much for ur tips! I passed IELTS on 6.0! It’s very good result for me, because it’s my first time ever passing such kind of difficult exam!!! :) :)

      Wednesday, August 21st 2013

        Congratulations :)

        Wednesday, August 21st 2013

        Hi Kate! How are you? I noticed in your profile that if I talk to you I can learn more English? ;) If I’m not wrong, please, add me in your skype. My account is cris.sp.brasil. I’d like met you. And I met one person that will like met you, because he’d like learn your language, russian. ;) See you! Best regards! Congratulations for your test!Thank you!

        Wednesday, October 16th 2013

        Hi Kate! Could you give me some tips about IELTS? Im taking TOEFL at the end of the year and I’m a little bit worried about it!

        Thanks x

        Monday, February 29th 2016

          Quer praticar alguem ?

          Wednesday, April 27th 2016

Good one.

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

Can you stop being so awesome? Each video you make just impresses and helps us more and more…

Congrats,Adan, best wishes for you.

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    I couldn’t agree more, Thalinho! Adam is really an excellent and awesome teacher!He also impresses me a lot. Thank you very, very much, Adam!

    Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

      Thumbs up!

      Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    You kill me Thalinho :)

    Thank you

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Hi adan. I like to join you guys. please give me your email id. I become fan of you .
please reply me soon. i need your help to improve my english
have a good day

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Hi Mohi,

    You can email us via engvid.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Thank you, Adam!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

Hi Adam

I don’t really have understood the expression “key terms” in this video.

By the way, thank you very much for your excellent work.

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    I think, I know it now. It means “important words” for the topic.

    Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

      Yes :)

      Friday, August 2nd 2013

thanks :D
please ,I have a problem,I cannot write a paragraph :(
my vocabulary isn’t much >_<
can't increase it
any help ?

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Hi Perky Girl,

    We have a few videos on here to help you build your vocab. Look for them in the search box at the top.
    Good luck :)

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Thank you Adam i like your lessons indeed i have some problems with my writing and that is my weakest point i hope thay your lessons will help me

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    sooo sorry i made a mistake i wanted to write i hope that

    Wednesday, July 24th 2013

That was a helpful lesson for me, thanks Adam!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

Question #1, the number cups of coffee,a person should drink everday,I think they should be every day,because it is an adverb of frequency,it show how often it should be.

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Good eye Cuong ta. You’re right, that was probably a typo.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Thanks for the cognitive lesson!

Adam, whether you can help? I absolutely cannot understand the difference between From where/where from, What for\For what…
and when to use this?

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Hi Kazumi,

    Well, there are some old English textbooks that teach that you should never end a sentence with a preposition. It’s a little old fashioned, but some people still believe that and follow that rule. They think you should say:
    From where did you get that dress?


    Where did you get that dress from?

    These days both are considered acceptable, unless you’re a purist. But they mean the same thing.

    Not sure if that answered your question, but I hope it helps. Let me know.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

      It helps me a lot! Thank you immensely ^-^

      Thus my conclusion is that If I want to say the well-known expression “Where are you from?”, I can also say “From where are you?”.
      At least this rule exists in our days .)

      Sunday, August 4th 2013

This is a very good lesson about writing skills suited for writing in any language, not just in English.

Thank you!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

good job Alex. I’d like you to make many lessons on how to write an essay.

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

hi i like this

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

thanks for your answer about your english.You’re a great teacher.Keep it on!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

    Thanks Alex. I’ll do my best to keep it up. :)

    Friday, August 2nd 2013


Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

thanx a lott

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

Hello Adam. Thanks for the video. I would like a suggestion about a helpful book to a foreigner PhD student to improve the writing. Thanks

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

Thanks, Adam! Great classes always. I’ve gotta watch that video again… See you!

Tuesday, July 23rd 2013

very easy to understand :). You simplified everything as shortly as you could and I found that the lesson wasn’t too sophisticated to comprehend:)Thank you, really like you and Ronnie :)

Wednesday, July 24th 2013


Wednesday, July 24th 2013

    let’s practice

    Friday, September 13th 2013


Wednesday, July 24th 2013

Hi Adam. Thanks for this lesson. it was very interesting and helpful for me.

Wednesday, July 24th 2013

Thanks. It’s very helpful. I will keeping following and learning your lessons.

Wednesday, July 24th 2013

Hi Adam. A dent is also a bump on a car’s body isn’it? In French writing style, a dent is called an “alinéa”.

I am studying English le best as I can. With this aim, I am working everyday vocabulary, grammar and pronunciation. One problem is the richness of the English vocabulary which probably counts more than twice the number of French words. In addition, a single word can become a verb or a noun and often, adding ‘ly’ or ‘ness’ to a verb, you get an adverb or a noun not to mention the phrasal verbs which are pure nightmares. However we can take advantage of this abundance of words to avoid repeating twice a word in one sentence.
Now, concerning grammar….
At last, I would say that pronunciation is capital to be understood by native English speakers, you are better off making vocabulary or grammar than pronunciation mistakes.
So, I can just say that learning English is a nice personal challenge..

Wednesday, July 24th 2013

    I agree Patple.

    Keep up the good work. :)

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

I appreciate you and website for these lessons, i was wondering if you could give all the vocabulary word related to (ANGRY and SORROW) including phrase related to these words…
thanks to all

Wednesday, July 24th 2013

    Hi Niravpanchal,

    If you go to m-w.com, they also have a thesaurus that will give you these words. Better yet, buy the Roget’s International Thesaurus“. It’s amazing.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

      Oh, Thank you for sharing the name of the book.

      Sunday, March 22nd 2020

Thanks sir,its the best website for me to impprove my english, and its very intresting lesson. please upload some other vedios which help me for writng.

Thursday, July 25th 2013

I try to answers the quiz without watching the video.so,i only got 5 correct out of 10.that was so bad.

Thursday, July 25th 2013

    Hahaha! What did you get *after* you watched the video?

    Friday, July 26th 2013

60 — this is the worst score I’ve ever had, at least for a very very long time. I just can’t choose the better option. Sometimes two, or even three, variants sound good to me, so how can I decide? :)

The funniest thing is that in my country people use tab for starting a new paragraph, and I do not follow that way, and I’m using space (skipped line) all the time because I think this looks a way better than a little indentation. Besides in the internet, everyone uses spaces because you can’t simply make tab in these forms on www pages when you are commenting something. :)

Thursday, July 25th 2013

    I agree. I skip lines as well, but it all depends on who you are writing for. Every publication has its own style guide. Academic writing, though, usually asks for indentation.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

thanks adam your lessons are really helpful.
I wanna know which English is considered standard world wide, British or American and why?

Friday, July 26th 2013

    Hi DSingh,

    Can’t really say there is a standard. I think American is more popular but that’s because America has a greater reach globally, in terms of Hollywood, CNN, etc. Internet English is mostly American as well. I’ll try to see if there is any research on this question and let you know.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Please keep helping me with my English. Thank you

Saturday, July 27th 2013

    Teacher Adam, Your explanation was very clear.. Big help for me on how to construct a paragraph.. Thank you so much..I got the idea.

    Saturday, August 27th 2016

Hy sir adam I just want to ask you where do you come from? Usa or uk

Saturday, July 27th 2013

    Hi Yuber,

    I’m Canadian :) (That’s somewhere in between )

    Friday, August 2nd 2013


Sunday, July 28th 2013

Thanks Mr.adam you are really a good teacher :)

Sunday, July 28th 2013

Dear Adam,
1st thing 1st,A Warm Hi :)
Would u mind 2 lend me a helping hand pls??!!!
So do I….So am I….Me 2….So have I….
In my book,they use in accordance with the verb o helping verb which sb is saying.
e.g. :A: I do my homework at the weekend.
B: So do I.

:) fatiima!

Monday, July 29th 2013

    Hi Fatima,

    Yes, that’s exactly right. Always agree with the verb.
    A: I love English.
    B: So do I

    A: I’ve never been to Paris.
    B: I haven’t either.


    Friday, August 2nd 2013

What’s up? How’s everything?

I’m having too much dificulty understanding the difference and usage of “on to” and “onto”. Could you explain them?

She held on to her child in the crowd.

Let’s step onto the dance floor.

So, how did you get onto this deal?( does get onto here mean to know about sth?)

Monday, July 29th 2013

    Hi Henrique,

    With on to, remember that the on goes with the verb, the to goes with the object.
    so, hold on, means grab, or hold tight. to what? to the rail.

    ‘onto’, basically means ‘on’. It’s not used as often as plain ‘on’.

    As for the ‘get onto this deal’, it means as you said, to come to know/be involved with something.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Thank you so much. Adam

Tuesday, July 30th 2013

Really awesome. but hard to me . Got long way to go…

Wednesday, July 31st 2013

Wow!!! This is an amazing video. The BEST VIDEO I’ve ever seen in my life. Many thanks Adam. I’m awfully obligated to you.

Wednesday, July 31st 2013

Thank you so muchhh! :)

Thursday, August 1st 2013

thank you a lot for support have luck……

Friday, August 2nd 2013

Hi Adam, great lesson! I thought it was going to be a pretty boring aspect of English ( sorry, but it’s not as much fun as say, idioms or vocabulary :)) ) but you made it really interesting and what’s the most important – useful :)

My question concerns putting quotations. I’m not sure if my inquiry is within the subject, but if it’s not too much trouble, can you please explain how I should quote in say, MA thesis? Just to be sure that we’re on the same page, for example ” learning should be an autonomous process” Brown J. … should I use ” or ‘ ? What else should I write, the year, the page, what if Mr. Brown is also quoting someone else ? Sorry if I haven’t explained my question thoroughly enough but that’s just it- I’m really confused when it comes to these quotations in e.g. MA thesis. Thanks a lot!:)

Friday, August 2nd 2013

    Hi Cornellie,

    You’re not alone. It is very confusing. First of all, you need to find out which style guide you’re supposed to use (APA, MLA, Chicago). Your MA syllabus shouold tell you that.

    Next, try OWL at Purdue. This site will give you all the formatting info you need. It’s a very useful and easy to use site.

    Let me know how it goes.

    Friday, August 2nd 2013

Thanks for the great comments everyone :)

Friday, August 2nd 2013

Hi Adam,

Saturday, August 3rd 2013

thanks Adam i’m always trying to focus with your lessons thank you for your helpfully good luck………

Saturday, August 3rd 2013

hi!what about how to use prepositions?

Saturday, August 3rd 2013

    Hi Stephen,

    We have a few lessons on this site about prepositions and more coming. Do a search at the top of the page.

    Friday, September 6th 2013

i failed in this test ) but it is useful lesson thank u so much

Monday, August 5th 2013

oh my god teacher!!! I understood a little a bit.finally i didn’t understand.may be it difficult for me to know this level. how could i understand this skill?

Thursday, August 8th 2013

    Hi Vangsavuth,

    It’s mostly practice. Also, feel free to ask questions here.

    Friday, September 6th 2013

Great teaching stuff. Plus, the technical that you used is unforgettable. Thanks Adam

Saturday, August 10th 2013

You are a great teacher , your have such an interesting manner to explain things , I understood all the lesson thank you very much .
Nadia from Iraq ★

Sunday, August 11th 2013

Really awesome

Sunday, August 11th 2013

Thank you very much for you lesson

Sunday, August 11th 2013

Very useful topic and lesson, and very interesting. It gave me a lot for almost 15 minutes! THANK YOU!!!

Monday, August 12th 2013

Thank you very much!! Very useful lesson!

Monday, August 12th 2013

This really helped me! I´m preparing the FCE. I would like to take it at the end of the year. Thanks!

Tuesday, August 13th 2013

jeez,I got only five out of 10. I think I still need to work on paragraphs.I could have done better.Anyway, I learned a lot from this lesson. Thanks,Mr Adam.

Tuesday, August 13th 2013

send me e mails that will better help me in this area.

Thursday, August 15th 2013

Thank you so much Adam. You are the best teacher! I need more lessons about writing essay. Please!!!

Friday, August 16th 2013

7/10 Very interesting! Thanks ,Adam.

Saturday, August 17th 2013

Thank you Adams, your ” writing skills ” was awesome. Have a nice week !
Best regards from Artentina,


Monday, August 19th 2013

Hi Adam,why do you do not reaply my question?

Saturday, August 24th 2013

Someone said ” the good teacher explains, the superior teacher demonstrates, the great teacher inspires” Adam, you got a gift of teaching, I wish to be one of your students.i am so happy I found the website.thanks for your effort.

Saturday, August 24th 2013

I’m sorry! I posted the comment at the wrong place.

Monday, August 26th 2013

It is very useful. How can I subscripe?

Thursday, August 29th 2013

very informative and easy to understand the principles of writing effectively.

Saturday, August 31st 2013

i didn’t get the lesson. my problem is i can’t write the easy very good, i need your help please

my email: cadykayombo38@yahoo.ie

Saturday, September 7th 2013

Hello Adam, please, can you tell me what means that sentence which is starts “yet, it is very question of costs…” ? I’ve been seeing that part “yet, it is this..” so much but nothing clear so far :(( I would be delighted if you could tell me with other explanations :) [and I will have an exam four days from now, please correct my mistakes if you see any :)]

Saturday, September 7th 2013

first of all, thank you so much =)
but I have another problem. next week I have an exam at Uni, level FIRST(B2) and for the writing, it could be an article, a report, a formal letter or an essay. I would know which are the main rules of each types of writing? For example: when and where phrasal verbs can be used, when not, or how many paragraphs there are for an article, how many for a report or an essay? and so on. I hope that you understand what I mean. Thank you so much another time:)
p.s.I’m sorry if there are grammatical errors in this comment :P

Sunday, September 8th 2013

thanks Adam ,it was very good .

Monday, September 9th 2013

Thanks a lot Adam.

Tuesday, September 10th 2013

thank you alot teacher, by the way, is there any simple formula for paragraph planning on task 1 & 2 that can be used to avoid thinking too much ??? coz i am going to take ielts test by beginning of Oct 13. Best wishes !

Thursday, September 12th 2013

Hi, you are teaching very well. I watched lessons by another teachers also. But you are the best. Thank you!

Friday, September 13th 2013

Thank you very much! I have immence problem in writing. I need to solve all obstakles. Engvid my teacher and course. Thank you very much!

Saturday, September 14th 2013

Hi Adam
Let me express my appreciation for ur fantastic and practical lesson.
I want to improve my writing, every time I check the collocation. plz give me pieces of advice I improve my writing fastly.

Monday, September 16th 2013

so fast

Monday, September 16th 2013

hi prof thank you so much .it is really simple and easy to understand ,but i have a problem now i know how to write a paragraph and an essay,but i don’t know how to link between sentences and organize my ideas within a paragraph…..For example (in addition,moreover,hence , as a result…….)sometimes i write essays but when i read it i just read a sentence after a sentence….there isn’t coherence and linking between my sentences just a group of words!!!please i want you to teach me how to join between ideas and sentences in order to form a paragraph and an essay .thank you so muchhhhh

Tuesday, September 17th 2013

Thank you so much ^^

Saturday, September 21st 2013

Hi Adam, Your lecture is very informative. Recently, in IELTS (GT), I have scored only 5.5 in writing in spite of getting 6.5 in speaking, reading and 7 in listening. After going through your lecture, I understand that how many mistakes I have made.
Now, I’m going to appear of IELTS by October 2013. I would be very thankful to you, If you could provide me some tips on Letter Writing.
Thanks in advance.
Thanks for your lecture on paragraph, that’s excellent

Sunday, September 22nd 2013


Simply superb!

I watched your video about writing paragraph and would like to improve my writing skills. I have belief that only by practice i can improve my writing skills. Do you have any books where i could write, and then i could check the answers myself. Or Do you have any other better suggestions.


Sunday, October 6th 2013

Thank you so much, Mr Adam! Your lessons are always so helpful to me. I really want to have more writing lessons about IELTS writing task 1.
Thanks again!

Saturday, October 12th 2013

how to find more idea? can you teach me?

Sunday, October 13th 2013

Hi Alex~ May I ask if we are writing friendly letters, we should start with :

Dear XXX

in this case we must have indent right?or we can:

Dear XXX,


Kindly wait for your reply thanks.=)

Thursday, October 17th 2013

Dear Adam,
Could you please repeat the name of web sites you mentioned in this lesson?
The lesson is really useful but difficult at the same time.
Thank you!

Sunday, October 27th 2013

After seeing this lesson, I am feeling more comfortable while writing. Thank you Adam.

Monday, October 28th 2013

when i was seeing this lesson i thought i under stand everything but when i took the exam i simply forgot everything !! this is my problem not just in this lesson always when i watch videos or anyone speak english i think that i know and it very easy but i always confused or afraid to make mistakes if i try it

Monday, October 28th 2013

that was great. thanks adam. more power!

Wednesday, October 30th 2013

Very practical class!!

Friday, November 1st 2013

Hi Adam ,

Can i have ur address email ? i wanna write and if it’s okay , ur correcte my essay . I’ll be very happy u r agree. Thank u so much Adam

Sunday, November 3rd 2013

Please I want to help me to write well essay

Thursday, November 7th 2013

Thank u Adam because of your useful lesson.
My question is we have to write 250 words in ielts exam as you said for each paragraph we can use 5 sentences. Can we write paragraph ?
My I ask to share a video about conclusion ?

Thursday, November 14th 2013

it is my task that i have to say thanks you and your parents because they give you us. :)
my grandma always pray Allah to give Gold us.now i pray to Allah to give Gold you.
if i mistake sory my lack english.

Saturday, November 16th 2013

Thank you very much Adam.But can you tell me how we will use the tense in any topic or many tenses we should use.

Tuesday, November 19th 2013

Thanks, 40%

Thursday, November 28th 2013

Thank you Adam for this lesson, it reminds us how important vocabulary is to avoid repetitions.

Thursday, November 28th 2013

on the video, I find the sentence “they have access to means with which to enforce the law and punish offenders.” advanced. I am not familiar with the term “with which”. If I were to write it, it would be something like “they have access to resources which can enforce the law and punish those who violate them.”.

Adam, do you mind explaining this? does this give extra points to the essay?

Sunday, December 1st 2013


Tuesday, December 31st 2013


    Thursday, January 2nd 2014

Great Class!!

It´s the sort of class that i´ll watch several times and take good information each time i watch. It´s not easy to make such explanation!!

Thank you Adam!

Thursday, January 9th 2014

Hello, Mr Adam Thank you so much for this interesting lesson . could you correct my paragraph please if you want of course

Their are many ways to find the behavior of some one in love .
First of all , He spend much time with you,and never leave you, as well as felling happy when he stay with you . Sencond,He remain with you in bad moment and god moment,For instance,When you faced many problems we find her next to you every day, Like your shade.Third,He always thinking about you and every day call you,So that hearing your voice . All in all, we conclude that this person fall in love with you, and want spend all his life with you .

Saturday, January 18th 2014

    Hello, Mr Adam Thank you so much for this interesting lesson . could you correct my paragraph please if you want of course
    Their are many ways to find the behavior of some one in love .
    First of all , He spend much time with you,and never leave you, as well as felling happy when he stay with you . Sencond,He remain with you in bad moment and god moment,For instance,When you faced many problems we find her next to you every day, Like your shade.Third,He always thinking about you and every day call you,So that hearing your voice . All in all, we conclude that this person fall in love with you, and want spend all his life with you

    Sunday, January 19th 2014

Morocco is one of many great places in the world. It has a sunshine weather most of the year,natural views as boaches, revers, mountains..and also calm and air fresh. Thats why receives many tourists from the world.

I know my teacher that I have many problem in writting that why I ask you please to help me to overcom that problem I try to write a descriptive paragraph

Saturday, January 18th 2014

sir ,
really your lecture was useful, helpful and amazing

Monday, January 20th 2014

thank you so much adam !!

Friday, February 14th 2014

Hi Adam,

First of all thank you for provide me an excellent knowledge about English.

I am going to appear in IELTS 22nd February.

My question is How to mentioned units of number in writing task-1 in case such as (10 Millions of cubic meters)?

In this case the unit is very big and in writing there are so many time numbers have to be mentioned. So How to deal with it?

Thanks And Regards,

Tuesday, February 18th 2014

Mr. Adam,
Thanks a lot for this video. I have learned a lot from it.

Friday, February 28th 2014

Thank you so much for this lesson! I’m developing my English skills about an year and I’m intend to do the TOEFL exam. I have difficulty on writting and your classes are helping me to fix that.

Wednesday, March 5th 2014

Hi! Adam, I have some question about sequencing word. How different among finally, eventually and ultimately?

Wednesday, March 12th 2014

Hi!Adam,I have some serious problem for doing text completion sentences.
How could i improve my understanding power.

Wednesday, March 19th 2014

Thank you Adam, I think it is difficult for me to understand. Even I tried to listen you twice and do the quiz, but I’m still confusing.

Thursday, April 3rd 2014

Hello Adam!
i am soumaya from Morocco i am one of your biggest fun. Actually, i am studying English first year at university Abd El Malik Asaadi i do not know if you have never heard about it .
My questions are:
1/ what was the website that can help us to improve our writing skills, you mentioned to it during this lesson
2/could you please tell me the names of some grammar books that can help me at the university please please.
i hope to answer my questions

Sunday, April 6th 2014

hi my dearest teacher
i was searching since 5 years in internet to learn english. eventually by the grace of god i found ur lecture thats very fantastic for me .
basically i am nurse working in saudi Arabia.i am striving for vocabulary and always have spelling mistake , sir is it possible to give me some special tip.

Wednesday, April 9th 2014

Hi Adam,
I heard you said; Style Guide book in 8:53, could you please write the title?


Monday, April 28th 2014

    @engVid Okay, he mentioned a title though, for where could I find MLA, APA…, so please write down the whole title and the writer. Best
    Unfortunately, nobody answer our question here!!

    Tuesday, May 6th 2014

very good lesson

Thursday, May 15th 2014

Fantastic lesson and fantastic professor!
Thank you.
Hamid from Oakville

Sunday, May 18th 2014

Hi Adam,
Thanks for your valuable tips about writing. Is it possible to explain task one including introduction,body and conclusion. I am trying for IELTS 7band( academic) and if you dont mind let me get your personal email id.

Sunday, June 1st 2014

Dear adam. Kindly tell me something about the word mean. For e:g i mean what i say.

Thank you very much.

Thursday, June 19th 2014

The video is informative! Would it be possible to tell us the difference between writing body paragraph with listing reasons and comparing or contrasting?

Sunday, June 29th 2014

Hai Sir,I became a huge fan of yours.After watching some of the videos of your teaching I could understand that excellent teachers are still available in this world.Your videos are really useful………I donot have much vocabulary to explain my sincere respect and thanks to you…..
I have a request….I will be so happy if you are able to suggest some books(In different category) having good vocabulary(Not having tough words).
Please suggest if there is any website having a facility to correct the writings……..

Thank you sir

Tuesday, July 8th 2014

Thanks I aprecciated the explanation for my wrong aswers . It is like learning any where in engvid. :)

Thursday, July 10th 2014

Hi Adam Thanks for teaching. but there’s a problem in my mine did you support me .i wanna to support me how to write in this topic .

Sunday, July 13th 2014

Thank you, Adam! You, guys, are the salt of the earth. I’m so happy to get to know all of you. My dreams come true with you!

Thursday, July 17th 2014

Thank you Adam.

Friday, July 25th 2014


Saturday, July 26th 2014

No…only 50 %.

Tuesday, August 5th 2014

That was amazing sir.. But I do like to know about ur bridges in this paragraph. I mean should I link every sentence with others in the paragraph?

Tuesday, August 12th 2014

Hi Adam,I just bumped into your videos about a week ago. I happen to like the way you and other teachers highlight English piece by piece. I am a
Filipino Nurse working in Saudi Arabia planning to take IELTS 2-3 months from now or when I seem ready. Unfortunately, I don’t know how and what to start. Please help me and guide me on this. Thank you very much.

Monday, August 18th 2014

Thankyou alot!

Thursday, September 11th 2014

Thank alots! I have learn more things on this website! :)

Thursday, September 11th 2014

Thank you Adam.I found it very useful .My problem is that am writing a lot of unnecessary vocabularies .And my ideas are not arranged .How should i start planning ?? Thank you again

Sunday, September 28th 2014

thanks adam. i have problem, how can i know about weak words and strong words. where i can found the resources and collected them.

Sunday, November 9th 2014

Hi Adam thank you. Good lesson, it was very helpful for me. I like very much your classes.

Friday, November 14th 2014

Hi Adam,
Can you explain the pronunciation of word “directly”?
You pronounced the “i” in it like “e” in the word “be” I have heard somewhere the “i” in the word “directly” like “i” in “lie”, “die”.

Saturday, November 22nd 2014

Hi Adam! This is a great lesson. I am planning to retake my IELTS because I did not quite reach the writing band score that I had wanted (I had a 6.5 but I was opting for a 7 or a 7.5). I like writing, to be honest, but I struggle a lot when it comes to academic writing. Your video made it easier for me to understand how ideas should flow within a paragraph and how to transition to the next paragraph without making the reader confused as to what I am trying to convey.
Thanks once again. Im looking forward to more videos from you regarding the IELTS and IELTS Academic Writing.

Sunday, November 23rd 2014

Really impressive VIDEOS. I must say you are in the real sense a fab teacher.

Thursday, January 8th 2015

your way ou explaining is really intersting, what i want if you don’t find any problem about that is i have a serious problem in my academic writing essays i’m a failure on them please if you could help to get over that situation ( and sorry about my english i think its bad ) thank you in advance

Thursday, January 22nd 2015

a very useful lesson,Adam… it would be a key for toefl writing section
I intend to pass toefl by the end of this month, any tips that u can provide would be the most welcome :)

Friday, January 23rd 2015

Hi sir adam im just a little bit confuse about the cloze passage reading can you give some advice plz ? Thank you

Friday, January 30th 2015

Your lessons are really helpful. You teach very well. Both the introduction and paragraph writing videos helped me alot. Could you give a video on concluding paragraph as well?? Thank you.

Wednesday, February 4th 2015

Loved your presentation. I might use the concept in my class, but will have to adjust the topic/thesis for my students. I am working on paragraphs and teaching the inter to an essay.

Friday, February 6th 2015


Wednesday, February 25th 2015

Thank you teacher Adam for all these lessons , I know it’s hard but very helpful , but I have a request if you can guys make few lessons about you know…far away of grammar on the streets for example ,things we see in our life, or find by walking on z garage when we find for example some sand pieces of wood a fence and all these stuff ,it will be very nice !!

Thursday, April 2nd 2015

Hi Adam!
First of all, thank you! This is a very useful lesson, like most of your lessons.
I was wondering, is the paragraph you gave as an example not too long for an essay? If you have 3 paragraphs like this + introduction + conclusin it’s gonna be more than 350 words, or even more than 400. I thought that an essay should be more concise and not too oversized, otherwise you may loose points. I though that perfect essay size is between 250 and 300 words.
Not even to mention that very few people could write such a long essay with good coherance and grammar in less than 40 minutes.
Could you comment on this, please.

Sunday, April 26th 2015

hi Adam help me out with this question

Indicate which underlined portion contains an error.

The collision happened on account of the brakes were faulty. Had the brakes been functioning properly then she would have been able to stop.
– happened
– on account of
– functioning
– then
I know the answer, but I need to understand why . It sounds perfect

Tuesday, May 12th 2015

    Hi. By your leave Mr. Been, dear teacher.
    I think THEN shold be changed into IF . because it is conditional type 3. Best tegards : soei

    Sunday, January 10th 2016

      …should…. sorry

      Thursday, January 14th 2016

thank you

Friday, May 22nd 2015

Dear Adam, many thanks for your great lessons. Where we can find very good and reliable examples of IELTS writing task 2 (scored 7 and above)?
Waiting to hearing from you.

Tuesday, June 9th 2015

Hi Adam, Thank you for the lesson. I dont think i can write an essay that complicated this much but i wonder if you were the reader on which band you score the paragraph about pollution:)

Sunday, June 21st 2015

Hi Mr, I really than you about that lesson but I hate writing because I think it’s the most complicated thing in English especially the acadmic essay , I hope that I can improve myself and be professional at it .

Sunday, June 21st 2015

very helpful lesson it was clear but I got bad result may be because this is the first time to deal with writing lesson ,I think more lessons from you in writing make me better

Monday, August 24th 2015

Hi Adam,
I really like your videos and I watch them on YouTube.
I have a problem with this video, though, it seems loading, but in the end the file is not found.
Thank you again for your help.

Friday, September 4th 2015

yeah..these are very useful for ilets and improving my english..thanks emma and anthony

Thursday, October 8th 2015

Really helped.

Sunday, October 11th 2015

hi Adam. I have several problems when it comes to write a paragraph. In my writing class the commas and to be creative is very hard for me because when I’m writing I can not see my errors until they corrected. Do you have any technics. that can help me.

Tuesday, October 13th 2015

it’s very awesome and helpful teaching..
thanks a lot sir

Thursday, December 17th 2015

Hello Adam,
I am anxious to thank you for your precious lessons.
Could you write down the website you mentioned at 9:00 in the video above?

Wednesday, December 30th 2015

in the vedio at 9:00 *

Wednesday, December 30th 2015

Hi Adam,
Could you please help me
I left the sentence below to be reviewed. Please correct me if am wrong.
What I had for the administration requirement were agreement and invoice paper. These two documents should be applied to our finance department soonest then they make a payment for the outstanding.

Sunday, January 10th 2016

hello sir could you please give me the structures of descriptive and narrative paragraph . I’ll be very thankful to you sir ADAM

Tuesday, January 26th 2016

Hi, Adam! Your explanation was clear and easy, thanks a lot! But i have a question about assignment when the task given like “Do you agree or disagree” or “Give your answer to support” or “discuss” so what’s the differences between them. I’ve heard that they should be different from each other, i have difficulties in finding it?

Tuesday, March 1st 2016

Salam Adam,
I like your teaching style, you are most of favorite teacher at engvid; Sir, I would like to request please design a lesson on profession email writing; like from start of an email till end. This is will help me a lot.
Thanks again Adam!

Saturday, March 26th 2016

hi, im nehru and im a malaysian.If you don’t mind can you teach me more on the next paragraph.

Monday, April 4th 2016

Dear Adam,
honestly you have done prefect correction on my writting method and thank you extrem much and i would really like to see your method or way to write IELTS essay conclusion .
i am looking forward your video about that

Friday, April 22nd 2016

Hi Adam, I just wanted to say this video is amazing. Thank you man. :)

Tuesday, May 3rd 2016

you are best teacher :)
thank you :) :D

Wednesday, June 22nd 2016

Adam, keep it in mind that your the best teacher in the world. love u

Thursday, June 23rd 2016

Hi Adam, I do have a question which is related to the essay you have written.
What is the meaning of the “very question of”?
Looking forward for your reply !!

Saturday, July 2nd 2016

Sir you are an amazing teacher :) thank you for your free lectures <3

Friday, October 7th 2016

Adam, I must say EngVid has greatly helped me and has massively increased my knowledge of english and enhanced my techniques to take on an exam like IELTs. I have my exam in the next few hours, I would like to thank you Emma and other trainers here. You guys are doing an amazing job and are helping millions of us who are taking this exam. a Big Thank you … and i would like you all to know i am a big fan of you and emma, i like your presentation styles .. would love to meet up and thank you guys in person once i get my PR for Canada .. and after i kickass in tomorrow’s test :) .. thank you guys !

Friday, October 28th 2016

I got 100, again. Wow!. Thanks Adam it’s a good lesson to practice.

Thursday, November 17th 2016

Terrific tips, thanks a lot, I was wondering if you could possibly produce a similar video but applicable to the Cambridge CPE Writing test, the main challenge in the test consists of writing a discursive essay where the key points of two texts of approximately 100 words each need to be summarized and evaluated, it also requires expressing my own idea/opinion on the topic in approximately 240-280 words.

I know this is uncommon, but I am taking the exam early next year and you have a way of explaining things that actually make sense, thanks a lot.

Wednesday, December 14th 2016

I have join this website just now. I really impressed by your lesson Sir. You the man great work for us who are actually learn to english as foreign language. Thank you

Tuesday, December 20th 2016

Hi Adam! I will be taking the TOEFL in 3 weeks. Do you give private lessons? I would like to have my essays corrected by you, and if you do how much do you charge?

Sunday, January 8th 2017

That’s not easy please can someone help me!!!!!!!

Saturday, January 14th 2017

Thank for the lesson, Adam! It is extremely useful for me. I’m taking a university contest in English in February. There is a task, in which I am to write a paragraph on the given topic. My problem is that it is not an essay, just ONE PARAGRAPH. I have to “state the topic, give reasons and make a conclusion” (it’s what the task says). Should I change the structure of the paragraph you talked about or it will stay the same? Please help! It is very important for me.

Thursday, January 19th 2017

Hii Adam . thank you for this interesting video .I just have one question ; what if we are supposed to talk about for exemple one of our stories or some experience e.g : to talk about an incident in which you felt courageous. and Thaank you

Monday, January 23rd 2017

hello sir.your video about paragraph was great,many useful tips in it.however,i took an English course just for that specifically.that was ok too,yet i still made 4 out of 10 correct of your quiz.oh boy i have to along way haven’t i?

Monday, January 30th 2017

Thanks Adam.
I wish I was born in America because of the English that I could not speak or write well.

Wednesday, February 1st 2017

First and foremost I would really like to appreciate what you have done.Then, Will I be asking you to make another video on grammars used in this lesson? Such as:
1. Offenders ( who are ) individuals and ..
2.Yet, it is this very .. ( this here I think should not be used )
3. limit anyone BUT the government .. ( the usage of but here is eye-catching. Please explain it)
4. May might “it” change ITS WAY OF DOING BUSINESS ( I think you should not use capital part because of using ” it ” ).
Thank you in advance

Monday, February 13th 2017

hi,what can I do to inprove my writing?

Monday, February 13th 2017

i am a new student of English language and linguistics and actually i don’t know how to improve my writing skills
can you give me some steps ?

Monday, February 20th 2017

Hi adam. I appreciate and love all your videos as well as emma’s.Now, i would like to ask if you can recommend a good site for online courses. This i believe , will extremely help me. Waiting for your reply. Thanks

Tuesday, March 7th 2017

Hello Adam,
I’m studying APP and I think to write a paragraph for me it’s the most difficult part. I liked your explanation, but when I have to write I can’t. :(

Wednesday, March 8th 2017



Monday, March 13th 2017

Hi Teacher Adam. i am a new student here. it is still difficult for me to write a paragraph.
How can i improve my writing?

Friday, March 24th 2017

Hi teacher Adam,

Have a nice time.

My question is how to deal with a new topic, unfamiliar to you or you have no ideas to write about, especially ,when you have no choice just to write.Knowingly, you are in exam and no way for using any other resources to get information.


Saturday, April 1st 2017

Hi Teacher Adam. I am always confused by pronouns. The second sentence in the model paragraph in the video: ‘The governments have the …the law to support them’. The last word ‘them’ in the sentence is referring to the ‘governments’ or the ‘great changes’ which mentioned in the first paragraph?

Saturday, April 8th 2017

Hi Adam,

How can I start to describe an example one the paragraph? And can I put any mine example?


Saturday, April 15th 2017

Hi Adam,
I have a question. Before My question I want to say something. First of all thank you for everything which you taught. Second in your opinion , your prefer is about indent and skip. which should I use for toefl. Thank you again.

Friday, May 19th 2017

I don’t know how to write a paragraph.always my marks very lowlow

Saturday, May 27th 2017

Practice makes perfect. :))
I can do it by learn everday.
Fighting, my friend!

Monday, May 29th 2017

Thank you mr.Adam . I have a question for you. In the paragraph. They have acess to means or They have acess to mean.

Tuesday, May 30th 2017

Thank you for the lecture Adam! I just have a question for you. When I tried to write “flow-bridges” especially at the end of the first body paragraph, it seemed a bit off of the main idea because it is rather more about the next paragraph. If I skip the flow bridge at the end, and just starting next paragraph, would it be too dramatic?

Wednesday, June 21st 2017

After the quiz I can understand much better the areas where I need more improvement. Thanks!

Friday, July 21st 2017

Love you Envied teachers the lesson was totally useful many thanks😊 this is my first time to learn writing skills and I was wondering if you “Mr.Adam” offer an online writing course ?

Monday, July 24th 2017

Brilliant video, so helpful!
Do you do skype tutoring? How much would that cost? If you do not do this could you recommend someone to me?!
If you could pm me i would appreciate that immensley. I have also messaged Editproof.com (is that your company also?) I have tried about 6 tutors already and I deperate to find the right tutor
thank you so much

Wednesday, August 23rd 2017

Hi Adam,
I would like to thank you for all the English lessons you have done for us. Much appreciated! I’ve learnt a lot from your videos. All the best!

Monday, August 28th 2017

Without words Adam. Great and difficult lesson. Thanks for your knowledge.

Friday, September 22nd 2017

I think that’s the most difficult part if you’re taking the TOEFL test, like I’m about to do soon. I wish there were a platform where we could get our essays corrected, even that in a general way, like… correct just a few so we see the most common mistakes. Mine would probably be the lack of vocabulary.

Wednesday, December 27th 2017

Also, Adam is one of the best teachers here. I like how he goes straight to the topic and is very clear when talking about something. Thanks!

Wednesday, December 27th 2017

Thank you sir for what you have learned to us .
Thank you very very very much 😊😊

Friday, January 12th 2018

what is technically

Saturday, January 27th 2018

Hello Adam! I am from Cambodia a small country in the world. Could u show me how to start a paragraph writing,please.

Sunday, February 18th 2018

Hello buddies…..!
I want someone to talk in English.
Here is my contact number +91 9992887878

Friday, February 23rd 2018

Lovely explanations! 8/10, need more practice to get 10/10 :)

Monday, February 26th 2018

Adam thank you…
You are the best

Wednesday, March 7th 2018

A good lesson as many others thanks Adam!

Sunday, April 29th 2018

I got 6.5 twice in ietls academics. Appearing again on 19th may. Can you give me structures for opinion,discussion ,adv/disadv essay.

Sunday, April 29th 2018

6.5 in writing, over all I have 7.5 score. 8.5 each in listening and reading and 7 in speaking

Sunday, April 29th 2018

Great tips…. was really helpful!!

Sunday, May 6th 2018

I like ur classes

Friday, June 1st 2018

Hi Adam,
I have been watching your videos quite a while, and I really want to let you know that you have been a big help to me.
I am preparing to take my TOEFL and GRE as part of my MBA admission requirements.
I have a question. What tips could you provide that will help me find ùy ideas during the writing for the TOEFL? I think that the grammar, the vocabulary and following the essay structure will be easy because those are standard. However, having the correct idea will also help you write faster your essay.
Would you mind sharing some tips please?

Sunday, June 24th 2018

Hi Adam,
Is there any good reference essay and letter writing book for ielts ?

Tuesday, July 3rd 2018

May I download this video from here?

Monday, July 9th 2018

    Sorry, no. All our videos can only be streamed on YouTube.

    Tuesday, July 10th 2018

Hi Adam,

Thesis bridge to paragraphs and bridging between sentences and paragraphs were a real eye opener. First of all, thank you and I was wondering if I could get the question or statement of this pollution body paragraph to relate it simultaneously.

Thursday, August 9th 2018

Hi, Adam, i’ve been parcticing but i need practice, by the way, your videos are so useful

Wednesday, August 22nd 2018

Hi sir, I found your channel on YouTube and I liked the way how you teach can I get some help from you please?

Sunday, December 2nd 2018

thanks, your lesson is timely for me. I’m working on my thesis proposal. and i need more of it.

Tuesday, December 4th 2018

If you’d rewrite the last sentence of the example paragraph “Yet, it is this very question of costs that limits anyone but the government to act against pollution.” how would it be? I am having a hard time understanding what it means… Thank you for your help.

Monday, January 14th 2019

I’m disappointed that I only got 40% on this test.
I’ll do it again later.
Thanks for the lesson

Wednesday, April 24th 2019

If you can talk more about reading especially ( Toefl one) .
And your lessons are awesome.🤗

Sunday, July 7th 2019

Thank u teacher adam. really i have understood very much. but i have to watch it again.

Sunday, October 27th 2019

Hi, this is Nicholas. I thought this lesson was very useful; arw there also lessons about the introduction and/or the conclusion?

Thankd, Nichlas

Friday, February 7th 2020

Perfect!Just what I needed. Thank you!

Wednesday, February 26th 2020

Is there a demo lesson available for writing conclusion?

Wednesday, February 26th 2020

Indeed,a very helpful topic. Thank you Anthony.

Friday, April 10th 2020

Hi Adam,
I liked how you explained paragragh writing. It’s clear and concise. I also liked the idea of the quiz.

Sunday, April 19th 2020

My dear adam. Is there any website I can upload my essays to find out have any mistakes or erroneous?

Tuesday, April 21st 2020

I’m a beginner, I’m preparing for ielts, If anybody wants to have conversation in English through skype Or any other platform, Dm on Instagram, here is my id-rehankhan7746

Tuesday, June 23rd 2020

5/10! Terrible! What a F marks I got! I can’t understand the question. What should I do for my English learning.

Monday, August 24th 2020

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